English Reflection Assessment, Ernest 11.1

At the first time I receive the notification of Assessment 3, I think that this assessment would be an easy assessment. But, after I do the assessment, I found that the assessment is pretty hard. In this assessment we need to do one multimedia task (power point presentation or poster). Two partial essay with outline and the last one the complete essay. The topic I choose for the essays was the comparison between HTC Touch Diamond and HTC Touch Pro. I was surprised because of the assessment is really hard especially the partial essay parts. At the first time, I was wrong because of I didn’t know that the partial essay need to include outline. So I redo the partial essay. The same condition is happening in the complete essay. I didn’t know that we need to compare and contrast the topic I choose. What I do was describing the topic I choose. So I redo the complete essay too. Through this assessment I get more knowledge about the similarities and differences of both phones. I also get more knowledge about the advantages and disadvantages of both phones. I try to do the best on the assessment so I think that all the essays and the poster I made is the best pieces of this assessment. I revised my work for several times even I do not have any chances to submit my drafts and to be corrected by Miss Laura. From this assessment, I learn to do the assessment as soon as I get the notification to get a better marks, I learn more how to write a formal essay and also get more knowledge about the topic I choose.