Finally, I’m done with my English assessment! I would say that this assessment task was a tough one. At first, I thought that this was an easy assessment since it only required us to write different types of essay and we are given ample of time. So I decided to it do it during the last couple of weeks. That’s when I realized that this task was hard and I should have started doing it earlier. I regret that I have only started doing this task in the last couple of weeks before it was due. However, I put all my effort and spent most of my time editing my essays and giving the draft to Miss. Laura and Miss. Karla. I got a lot of feedbacks from them and it really helped me to improve my essays.
For my topic, I chose Blackberry Bold and iPhone 3G. I have a really tough time in doing the research yet I learned a lot from it too. I have to search the information from a lot of different resources to make sure that it is valid. From this research, I learned that both Blackberry Bold and iPhone 3G are the most popular gadgets in the market. They both have their own strengths and weaknesses. Blackberry Bold are popular for the Blackberry Messenger and iPhone 3G are mostly used because it works like the iPod and even better it can be used for communication as well. I also discovered that Blackberry can cause addiction just like drugs! I also did a reaction partial essay, giving my experience of using a Blackberry Bold. From this, I had realized that Blackberry had become something essential in my life and it is starting to distract my studies. So I came to a conclusion that I need to manage my time wisely in order to maintain my grades in school. From this assessment, I have learnt different types of academic writing. The most difficult one I would say will be writing a partial essay. But then by learning how to write a partial essay, it made me realized that writing essays will be so much easier when you have an outline as your guide. The most enjoyable task from this will be creating a persuasive visual text. I have a lot of fun in designing my poster and learning how to use adobe Photoshop as well.
I believe that I could do a much better job in the future and I have learnt that procrastinating is not good. I would like to thank Miss. Laura and Miss. Karla for giving me the opportunity to learn such valuable lessons (:
For my topic, I chose Blackberry Bold and iPhone 3G. I have a really tough time in doing the research yet I learned a lot from it too. I have to search the information from a lot of different resources to make sure that it is valid. From this research, I learned that both Blackberry Bold and iPhone 3G are the most popular gadgets in the market. They both have their own strengths and weaknesses. Blackberry Bold are popular for the Blackberry Messenger and iPhone 3G are mostly used because it works like the iPod and even better it can be used for communication as well. I also discovered that Blackberry can cause addiction just like drugs! I also did a reaction partial essay, giving my experience of using a Blackberry Bold. From this, I had realized that Blackberry had become something essential in my life and it is starting to distract my studies. So I came to a conclusion that I need to manage my time wisely in order to maintain my grades in school. From this assessment, I have learnt different types of academic writing. The most difficult one I would say will be writing a partial essay. But then by learning how to write a partial essay, it made me realized that writing essays will be so much easier when you have an outline as your guide. The most enjoyable task from this will be creating a persuasive visual text. I have a lot of fun in designing my poster and learning how to use adobe Photoshop as well.
I believe that I could do a much better job in the future and I have learnt that procrastinating is not good. I would like to thank Miss. Laura and Miss. Karla for giving me the opportunity to learn such valuable lessons (:
Elissa Gunawan- 11.1
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